ArchivedLogs Talk:Vignette - Waiting

Augh, Hivey. Beyond the general something-clenching-inside response this sort of character circumstance is triggering in my POOR innerJim wishing he could have been there, the narrative style re: the topic works well in portraying that strange...bored panic (panicking boredom??) hospitals can cause. Minimalistic and tactile at the same time. 'metal vibrating cold against his skin' ghghgh shivers. --JeepRanger (talk) 21:51, 17 February 2014 (EST)