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- Kind of torn somewhere between all the D:!!! And a more literary purring. Really like the stylistic choice to include fragmentation and tempo breaks into the flow of the narrative. It gives a more intimate experience while reading. Poor Jax :\ -- JeepRanger (talk) 16:39, 17 July 2014 (EDT)
- Aughghghfhgjk. That was well crafted though the fractured writing really puts you in the feel of his... fractured. Mind. Augh :| --Borg (talk) 18:13, 17 July 2014 (EDT)
